Life is like a song.
It goes up and down, round and round
and off the ground.

And if you hear me singing,
don't try to stop me.
Just like the flowers blooming,
I'll only stop if you kill me.

Shine.
You glow with confidence.
I wish I could, I wish I could go.
Helpless child beside me.
I wish I could, I wish I could help you.


A song is like a dream.
It goes round and round, up and down
and off the ground.

If you hear me screaming,
don't you dare to stop me.
Just like the flowers bloomin,
I would only stop if you killed me.

Shine.
You glow with confidence.
I wish I could, I wish I could go.
Helpless child beside me.
I wish I could, I wish I could help you.

i like your sense of melody... the wide "ah"s are really nice, especially in the beginning.  very cool.

in think the stereo sweeping that the guitar has is a little too strong, and sometimes (at least with headphones in) it got a little pulsy and made me feel dizzy.  But in all other respects, I really like the song!  In particular, I like the verse parts, about the flowers blooming.  Very good metaphore.

I'll be sure to rate the song!
Laterz,
Tim