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Basketcase helped me out with the rap part, sooo great!
tried to fatten the mix a bit, changed the break (no more Billie Jean lol)
'pervektion' aint in my dictionary i guess
but i think its eatable now
tnx for all comments tips and critiques on previous version !
tried to fatten the mix a bit, changed the break (no more Billie Jean lol)
'pervektion' aint in my dictionary i guess
but i think its eatable now
tnx for all comments tips and critiques on previous version !
Mix sounding good...I really enjoy the break now..not just because I'm in it either! No more Billie Jean! My favorite part is actually the chorus. Sweet atmosphere and emotion...I just bought a new audigy sound card and a new set of speakers ( logitech Z-2300) so I will be blasting this in a few. 
great mix, indeed. I like the guitar work in the song. the speed is good, but i like the way that the beat kind of mutates from section to section. keeps it very interesting. i like the chorus, as well. i think it's in the synth, with the slight change of key (i think that's what it is)
i'm never much of a fan of fadeouts, but your song seems to end properly, yet fades out slightly, letting the song end before it gets to silent. any reason? still a great song, either way. good work! I like the feeling in the vocals, both for you, max, and you basketcase!
Bravo, les gars.
i'm never much of a fan of fadeouts, but your song seems to end properly, yet fades out slightly, letting the song end before it gets to silent. any reason? still a great song, either way. good work! I like the feeling in the vocals, both for you, max, and you basketcase!
Bravo, les gars.
BasketCase wrote…
Mix sounding good...I really enjoy the break now..not just because I'm in it either! No more Billie Jean! My favorite part is actually the chorus. Sweet atmosphere and emotion...I just bought a new audigy sound card and a new set of speakers ( logitech Z-2300) so I will be blasting this in a few.
I think the break is great becáuse you are in it! cant thank u enough
hope it sounds well on your new set
TonightsLastSong wrote…
great mix, indeed. I like the guitar work in the song. the speed is good, but i like the way that the beat kind of mutates from section to section. keeps it very interesting. i like the chorus, as well. i think it's in the synth, with the slight change of key (i think that's what it is)
i'm never much of a fan of fadeouts, but your song seems to end properly, yet fades out slightly, letting the song end before it gets to silent. any reason? still a great song, either way. good work! I like the feeling in the vocals, both for you, max, and you basketcase!
Bravo, les gars.
i now nothing of key change in this lol .., its all in Em, but just before the chorus there is a chromatic 4 note progression(E-F-F#-G) maybe that makes the starting E chord from the chorus sounds 'changed' ?
tnx for comps on the vox, i know mine aint too tight, i dont sing much, and this is kind of lo for me and i just had lots of fun doing it, felt like acting a bit since i dont talk that low
reason for fade: none, except for the feel to do so, felt like it should be this way, although i did give it a go and finished the ending (which indeed wasnt intended to be audible untill the end of the fade at first but bla bla...)
i just liked it
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| Black symphonic metal meets nu metal? |
Dark wrote…
Black symphonic metal meets nu metal? :P
The lead was fine, and the outro was fine. I dunno what you were talking about in chat.
hehe, love that one Dark(seems u remember the historie of this song :p )
about the chat, its just fine if ppl dont hear the slide in the solo guitar as a mistake, but i just remained unsure about it because i know it was a slip of the finger(which i left there bcs i liked it)
SirBorris wrote…
love everything except the rapping... it just doesn't suit the song imo.
excellent otherwise though, and gets a v. high vote
Ian
tnx for opinion Ian, i just like to experiment and look for contrast and or combinations,
i wanted a female vocal singin or telling a poem on the break at first, but i couldnt find one.
i do agree though, also the lyrics arent a cohesive story at all,
this song has come a long way, i might give it a new shot in some time to bring it all together.
but still i like it without thinkin of that
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