I just finished a few tunes tonight I am really excited about them.This is the best stuff I've ever did so far both musically and producingI know their still rough and need more fine tuning but I like to share one with you guys.Thanks for all the advice.you guys are the best

randy

I wish I knew how to do those cool pinch things.

Awesome guitar work, however, the drums can get terribly out of time. You really ought to have sequenced the drums first and recorded everything else afterwards. Your vocals have potential, but you need to work on staying in tune. It sounds like you're backing away from the mic during the verses.

I really like the sound of chorus.

I ditto everything theotherguy said, brilliant guitar playing. kick ass solo. keep going cos its got loads of potential.

Ian

rockin dude!
hey i have all that (drum)timing probs too and i dont even play as good as you lol

why dont you try singing along when you practis scales, gets your voice trained and it will sound so much better
(i should do that more often too though)

you know how to make things sound good, neat producing

thanks for the comments...I forgot to add compression to the vocals before I posted it(!!!!).I sounds better now,everything isn;t so spikey at times. That was more or less a rough rough mix.thnaks though for the comments

Nice guitar..

Woa nice guitar tone again!!!Black label society!!!!This sounds like Zakk good to hear the influence!!!!Man the drum are bit off but is still a really good song..Hope you can resolve the drum issues soon..Ill sound super solid once you do...Sounds like your voice fades in and out a bit! Are you moving away from the mic as you sing?
Anyways good job!

thanks as always marino....yeah I hate singling and I'm really emabarrased about my voice....but It sound salot better now after I added soem compression ,kinda makes everything equal....Thanks about the zakk comments...i liek him alot....Its kinda a bummer though casue although he is my fav guitarist I wish it wasn;t so obvious...I like other guys alot liek steve gaines and neil young alot too but I just liek alot of the things zakk does...I think alot of my leads are starting to sound more rhoadsish. I got out my ozzy songbook and really sat and learned alot of the crap the right way and its really influenceing my leads in a rhoads way ,which is cool.

thanks again

Now this is my type of music. Fantastic guitar playing. It's similar to my stuff but I'm a bit faster in my tunes