Hi  all,

This one is wierd.really wierd.and maybe even approaching graphic, But i guess its what im feeling these day's. one of those days when nothing just seems to work out. Anyways let me speak through my music.

Oh and of course, do comment and if you really like it, vote as well.. Now i feel I overdid the audio clips. Anyways let me know what you think

Man pretty creative....Good music talk..dark and depressed...The sound clips are very theatrical...Nice concept,good quality production too....You did fine I think!!!

yeah, i like your creativity. jeez, those sound clips are kinda creepy. they certainly get across the emotion, but imho they could be slightly queiter cos they overpower the music in some places. The music has a great dark atmosphere. The piano sounds good, but maybe a bit unnaturally tight.

good show

Ian

i dunno, SirBorris, i like the piano sound.  something about it makes me think about some scary haunted building... maybe it's my 8-bit video game exposure that makes me like the way digitalised instruments sound sometimes    i'd place the digital instruments at around the playstation era though :P

the sound clips were quite loud, and i found myself having to turn it down a bit for the sake of not making the others in the house what the heck i'm listening to, with people screaming and getting eaten alive   

I like it though!  I browsed to this via the page for the songs listed in this month's battle. I'll be sure to vote.

Tim

Breaking up from a relationship always stirs up great emotion, so good that you were able channel it with this song.

You've done a great job.

Rated

Denis

hmm..
starting was too good..
ya man you really brought out the pain of the break up here..
i could feel it..!!

at the end the vocals were a bit over done..
but liked it overall..

good work..
and hope you pass this phase soon!!

that is one of the best songs i heard on this website it is very dark and depreessed i give u a thumbs up

Jesus! what a therapy session for you eh? Great stuff..yes the samples are too loud and bit over the top sometimes..esp the repeated frantic whipping..that's definitely very video-game esque

You have a talent for crafting up this song with such a very specific feeling. It conveys exactly what you want. I give it an A-.