word.

Man, this has some impresive moments (0:40 to 1:00 for example) but in my opinion it lacks some kind of flow between the diferent parts.  And (again, this is only my opinion) the lead at the beggining needs more "body" as it sounds a bit rigid to me.  I think this could be a great trance track if you could escape from the MIDI sounds a little bit more.

def great stuff,

does seem to shift rather harshly

lovin it from around 2:10 flow is nice

 

all in all very good, glad you made another, keep them comming please

I'm no expert with this genres.

The production sounds top notch, sounds club materieal to me, can see a few people raving to it, if
that's the right word LOL

Keep 'em coming Toko!!

Denis

not my genre so not qualified to say anything other then I enjoyed listening! 

personally, i find the transitions just perfect!  Different or Abrupt don't necessarily mean Bad.

The 2:10 section is really great, and I love the way that it jumps back into the lead.

Very, very good work.  I have an interest in making this kind of music, but I'm so terrible at it :P  I can never map what I have in my head out to a loop processor. 

I saw this because of the page which lists the songs entered in the battle this month--- I'll be sure to vote!
Tim

I am inclined to agree with Aetheris on this one....  Definitely needs something to help mesh this together, so it flows better....  THe bass is pretty cool, though should have some nice deep subs hitting every so often, to rattle my teeth, and make me cry for my momma.... THat is what it's missing... Definitely....Now that I have gone through the bad, let me say that it is a sweet composition, and I look foward to much more from you...

         Keep em coming man....
                           
                           JimK

I think it's COOL!>..... keeps ya tappin' to the beat!
Was nice to listen to.

Thanks!

-NT4M

This is sounding pretty wicked - as has already been said the flow towards the end is pretty wicked.  Maybe just need to mix the bassline up a little bit here and there to keep it interesting...even if its just cutting it in and out or doing some high/low fading with it to keep it dynamic in places.  Great track, has potential to be even better!

Koeshi

loved the funky tune..
complete song..
man..
no critics!!

enjoy..
got my vote!!

Great work man!
I feel that everything blended together awesomely!
When it gets to about1:20 change up the cymbal a bit. It was starting to lose my attention.
Love how it goes back to reoccuring themes;that's always great for techno. :]
Other than that I don't have any other complaints.
Really loved this song.
One to download :]

Good luck!

thanks all! your comments make me happy haha

great variety there, i liked it

I was very pleased to find a tune of yours that i hadn't already reviewed.  You're mixes are exceptionally clear!  You have a natural ear for it..  I thought i was decent and then i heard this.  Im quite jealous.  This particular tune is one of your more commercial sounding.  Quality is exceptional all around.  A bit "clubbish" for my taste on this one, but very much appreciated!