#1March 15th, 2008 · 11:00 AM
12 threads / 12 songs
89 posts
better than before
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It’s in the battle 2008-04

a song about changes in my life and how things are better than they were.

Better than Before

You caught me off guard as I was running
showed to me Your Incredible Love
took me up high on a mountain
and showed to me what's in my heart

You picked me up when I have fallen
no condemnation in Your Voice
held me close during my time of grief
given me wisdom beyond my age

and I know You better than before
yes I know You
You came through my front door
yes I know You
better than before

You walked beside me in a distant land
when thousands of miles from my home
You were my heartbeat when my soul was breaking
You were the joy in my song and dance

I'm looking up to the hills now
watching the clouds as they go by
my heart is waiting and my soul is vexed
to see the coming of my King
and those in the graves will hear His Voice
will come forth and stand upright
and we will all be changed
this world will not be the same
when we see You coming in the sky
on a White Horse

c.2006 jgv

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#2March 20th, 2008 · 12:11 AM
2 threads
7 posts
United States of America
perty good
Decent recording, like the lyrics,love the harmonics on the gutair. catchy chorus.the water at the beginning makes me wanna take a piss.jk
#3April 6th, 2008 · 03:40 AM
6 threads / 6 songs
70 posts
United States of America
I dig all the stuff I've heard by you man..I'm a big fan of acoustic music....The vocals are really uplifting man
#4April 7th, 2008 · 11:02 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
I am
Looking to the sky for the white horse!  Wow... powerful song...  well done..

                  I hope you are working on a CD, you could make it even if only on CDBABY, try it out..

#5April 8th, 2008 · 03:25 AM
373 posts
great mood, nice compliment of vocals to the guitar...

Hai Ke Yi!
#6April 12th, 2008 · 04:31 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,371 posts
United Kingdom
Really nice, I'm getting used to your sound, your songs a real.

Not critique on this , wouldn't change a thing.


#7April 14th, 2008 · 05:39 AM
5 threads / 2 songs
51 posts
loved the song!!
great man..
enjoyed it at every moment..!
#8April 14th, 2008 · 12:46 PM
your vocals were great, loved the chord progression, harmonics and melody of the song in general. You have a very unique sound!
#9April 14th, 2008 · 01:12 PM
9 threads / 8 songs
207 posts
United Kingdom
Gotta agree with Jackfancy - the vocals do compliment the guitar really well.  Nice sound overall.

#10April 14th, 2008 · 04:09 PM
16 threads / 13 songs
43 posts
Like it man.

You have a very nice style to your writing reminds me kinda of a neil young sound. very nice man. keep it up.
#11April 19th, 2008 · 04:36 PM
50 threads / 12 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Recording quality holds it back for me.
The beginning was too slow for me, however, we all have different tastes of music and I can't say that any of this song was badly executed--it just didn't fit my taste.

Songwriting wise, though, this is fantastic. It's a really powerful song.

Overall a B+ because of recording quality...it just really held back the feel for me.
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