Hey everyone, hope you like it.

muy bueno!

I was expecting the vocals a little sooner, I like the added snare - but its the only thing that seems to designate the added vocals until 1:20 when the song seems a little more upbeat somehow. Around 2:00 when the lead comes in I was very happy. I tas my kind of jam, all slow and smooth. Lots of emotion is built there, some suspense. The vocals could utalize that energy there, but I wasn't unhappy with the vocals. I just wanted a little more slam. 3:21 I loved the high pitch you threw in there.

lol and then the simple two note ending was perfect!

I love that snare!! is it real or sampled?   Nice rythm guitar... and great lead!
I agree with Dark about the vocals..... and the ending 

It's my electronic drum kit, Rolland TD-1's. I played around with compression and equalization to bring them out. Glad to hear that you guys liked it!

It reminds me a little of the song "Dont let me be Misunderstood".
It's a nice song, but I guess the tempo could be a bit faster to give it a more rhytmic character. Also, could you try some normalizing or compression to make it sound louder? It's very low.
I really like the performance on the drums, and the sound of the drums! Well done, overall!

Really good recording and beautiful song. You have a fantastic voice, great range. Agree I would like to hear it build up towards the end of the song but this is really a matter of personal taste. Guitar lead is brilliant.