a bit messy, but i like that

well it is all just a little messy. Trying to be clever like this doesnt always wrk but keep tryin hard at it i am sure u will get it right soon.

Pretty cool, like everyone else said, a little confusing, but it was really neat sounding

awsome melody.
some of the parts are alittle hard insync - kind of reminds me of tuesdays gone by lynard skynard.
great work

isn't that a doubling effect on the lead?

This is soothing....Lol. Me like.