This is my newest piece of work, rough recording #1. After repeated listenings I've decided it could use some soft harmonica during the verses and maybe some hammond-sounding keys throughout.

Any other thoughts?

Nice guitar recording!!!you have a real good voice and a great knack for nice melody.Very organic and fresh...Nice harmony although a bit of finessing would be good.Make me feel good music mate good job...

Don't know if by adding other instruments would improve the song, the guitar and Vox sound just great. The harmonies are beautiful.

Maybe some more Harmonies

Very nice

Denis

Im with Dennis on this...............

just a better recording to balance out guitar and 2nd voice

and check out the  harmonies so they sound very confident

lots of guitar towards the end.................. i suppose waiting fer lyric

love it

kersploosh

Almost there.  Just a-little more tweaking of vocals, vocal melody.  Like the fundamental intention.  Anybody got a canoe?  How bout a solo at the end?

Or, you could finger pick to loose the harsh metallic sound.  The music is really folkie. Thats seven kinds of awesome. Hard panning the riff to the right and no doing it that much distracted me. =D Definately some tasty in here.