#1February 29th, 2008 · 11:16 AM
20 threads / 18 songs
160 posts
United States of America
Ride the Seas
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This song is not in a battle


This is my newest piece of work, rough recording #1. After repeated listenings I've decided it could use some soft harmonica during the verses and maybe some hammond-sounding keys throughout.

Any other thoughts?

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#2February 29th, 2008 · 11:20 AM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Nice guitar recording!!!you have a real good voice and a great knack for nice melody.Very organic and fresh...Nice harmony although a bit of finessing would be good.Make me feel good music mate good job...
#3February 29th, 2008 · 04:02 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,379 posts
United Kingdom
Don't know if by adding other instruments would improve the song, the guitar and Vox sound just great. The harmonies are beautiful.

Maybe some more Harmonies

Very nice

Denis
#4February 29th, 2008 · 05:21 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
re: Ride the Seas
Im with Dennis on this...............

just a better recording to balance out guitar and 2nd voice

and check out the  harmonies so they sound very confident

lots of guitar towards the end.................. i suppose waiting fer lyric

love it

kersploosh
#5March 1st, 2008 · 02:57 AM
24 threads / 19 songs
171 posts
United States of America
Almost there.  Just a-little more tweaking of vocals, vocal melody.  Like the fundamental intention.  Anybody got a canoe?  How bout a solo at the end?
#6March 5th, 2008 · 06:40 PM
14 threads / 14 songs
232 posts
United States of America
Or, you could finger pick to loose the harsh metallic sound.  The music is really folkie. Thats seven kinds of awesome. Hard panning the riff to the right and no doing it that much distracted me. =D Definately some tasty in here.
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