I have listened to your last couple of posts and I have to say that the recording, production, composition is excellent, very professional and I agree you have a great future. This song really grabbed me more than the others. I love the haunting sounds and the mood of the song. Great beat.
Only critique is I have to agree that the by the end of the songs they begin to feel a bit repetitive, perhaps shorten a bit (personal feel).
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Only critique is I have to agree that the by the end of the songs they begin to feel a bit repetitive, perhaps shorten a bit (personal feel).
Downloaded and added to favourites.
I agree with WaM - superb stuff but too long!!! I love the hooky riff in this but a whole minute of intro is just a bit self-indulgent. OK live but in recording - way too long!!!
I would respectively suggest starting it at 0.40 and a fade out from 4.30. Try doing it manually on the player - you will see what I mean! (Iknow the playing is great in the intro but it throws it away way too soon)
More compact = more impact. . . . and the riff(I love it) is enhanced and not nearly so repetitive.
Overall, superb stuff and I am already REALLY looking forward to what you do next.
Hope I didn't bash too hard

I would respectively suggest starting it at 0.40 and a fade out from 4.30. Try doing it manually on the player - you will see what I mean! (Iknow the playing is great in the intro but it throws it away way too soon)
More compact = more impact. . . . and the riff(I love it) is enhanced and not nearly so repetitive.
Overall, superb stuff and I am already REALLY looking forward to what you do next.
Hope I didn't bash too hard

This is why I like this site so much 
Thanks guys, message received. I know exactly what you mean. I guess I'm going to try to keep my future songs from dragging.
Thanks for listening. And bashing
- Ben

Thanks guys, message received. I know exactly what you mean. I guess I'm going to try to keep my future songs from dragging.
Thanks for listening. And bashing

- Ben
Great work taka and as usual real interesting layering.Everything seems to cut trough real well.The multi guitar layers work well.It sounds like a very chill track with a twist of darker tonalities....The banjo solo was great!!!Your one talented individual!!!!!!I don't mind the length ,when I was about 15 and 16 all the songs I loved were 6 minutes or more!!Many of my songs are over 5 minutes....I think thats a matter of taste!!!!
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I've listened to all of your songs posted, and I like how this songs seems to drag, just a matter of preference I guess, although a little change at the end might help, Your production quality is amazing, and vox very good. Love the, Mandolin solo? is it?
Love the Vox effects
Maybe try to be just a bit more outgoing with the vox, you have an amazing voice, so you should definitely exercise that.
Great job
Love the Vox effects
Maybe try to be just a bit more outgoing with the vox, you have an amazing voice, so you should definitely exercise that.
Great job
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