#1February 15th, 2008 · 01:03 AM
51 threads / 31 songs
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United States of America
The Perfect Monday Demo
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This song is not in a battle


Recorded without chris...

Corbin does both guitar parts. I had to show him the slide part though.

I did vocals and drums...

This is a DEMO so there will be more unexpected instruments popping in and out as well as a bass and maybe a keyboard part.

later

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#2February 15th, 2008 · 01:21 PM
115 threads / 18 songs
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United States of America
that slide part sounds really buzzy, and probably a bit out of key from the rest of the song.  It's in a different key than the rhythm guitar and the vocal... not by much (I don't think) but enough to cause dissonance.  Try pushing it up a half step or two and make sure it's got the same sharps and flats in its chords.

I do like the rhythm part a lot though, and the drums fit the tone pretty well.  The ending was a little goofy, with the reversed echo'y fade, but altogether I think this could go someplace pretty easily, with a little more time and attention.  Like you said, it's a demo, so it's by no means done.

most critical thing to tweak right now, I'd say, is the sliding part.  It probably only needs to be modulate up a fret or two before it sounds more on target.  Keep posting the results as you work with it, for sure!

Tim
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