I wrote this song with a friend of mine.  He did all of the music, harmony and some lead vocals.. He is the one with the deep voice lol

This is a great song stranger! lol!!! We might just have to do a colaberation sometime or another!

hope this is not a one-time-thingie

great potential. nice composition.

chorus is very nice and the two voices fit together.

but... misssing a bass and some ambient effects (strings or pad sounds or so...)

did you ever think about the main vox could be a female voice?

good sound but the song is lame

Nice constructive comment there mate. If you don't like the song acknowledge that this is a matter of taste. Fact is this is a high quality recording of a well put together song. A little respect dude.

Yeah we always get those enlightening comments,somehow they don't last long...So no worries.

Yeah the track is great.I like where you have taking this...Pretty good sound recording....Good vocal duo guys!
M.

Thanks for the comments guys

I must agree... I think this is a decent track...very nice recording..its sounding nice coming through my speakers.. I really like the Acoustics....nice vocals...they go well with the style of music...as Triton said...I hope this isnt a one time deal. I would like to hear more songs coming from your page...nice work

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what a very good song!
my only comment would be that you might sing it a tad bit too low for your voice
maybe try to play it a tone higher or so and I think your voice would fit more comfortably
otherwise great job guys I agree that a bass line would add body to the track but I wouldn't add to many instruments because the composition is very good and don't need that much orchestration
very good first song you've put up there! I hope there will be more

oh I like this .. very nice. sounds like at times the guitar is out but then all at once it's not..  Maybe just my ears.

I love the accents at the end of the chorus build up... great tension and release.   very well done.. gets very high vote.

Nice song man. I really like the harmonies. I'd to hear some other stuff by you. Nice guitar playing as well. interesting contrast in the vocal ranges. This song might sound great if it was done just acoustic

I agree with vincentL... I think the vocals need to go up more often... cuz when it does, it sounds great with this song... The lyrics aren't my cup o tea but the overall feeling and production sounds great!  Good show!



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