Uploading all of my partially completed songs. I have enough for an album now and even some new equipment to record with, but can't seem to get off my butt and record

help!

Unlike the other song I uploaded today, this has all the vocals all the way through -- however the first half are doubletracked and in some cases have some harmonies. The second half is just the regular vox track Also, there is no instrumentation apart from the basic rhythm guitar

Nice vibe with the strumming (could use a little tightening/cleaning up to make it perfect) I feel as though you are lacking confidence or your having problems reaching some of the notes or maybe playing and singing? This coming from the vocally challenged lmao. Nice tune, needs work but worth developing..

Again a very pure hearted song.Great voice and feel.The vocal panning is not in my choice of mix but the value of purity still remains on the song!!!good one amigo!!

I think this song could have a lot more potential with more mixing in the vocals. I agree with Marino the panning of the vocals was a little strange it seemed off balance.

i like your voice.  It's SO hard to do perfect multitracking, which shows up as dissonance in a track like yours.  I'm not trying to put your song down at all, because it happens to all of us.  You're bold to try to do it to the whole song (minus that second half you haven't done (yet?).

Nice title.  Nice lyrics.  Nice melody.  Like you've said, it's a partially completed song, so I can't treat it as finished, but I'll tell you what I think about where it's going, at least.

Honestly, I think this would make a better ambiance with an accoustic, but that might have just been what you had to work with at the time.  (I'll be honest, I haven't been active enough in the Audio forum to have reviewed any of your other songs, so I don't have a clue what you work with, yet.)  With an accoustic, I think it would help the music ring out a bit more.

You've got a nice melody, like I said, and (like most of our melodies) it could use a little fine tuning.  As for the panning mentioned by the others, I thought it was alright. so long as both sides were present.  Since the second half doesn't have any layered vox, you've only got a melody in the right ear.  That's not how you intended the final product to be, I'm sure :P  No worries. 

Oh my gosh my back is killing me.  I need to go lie down on the floor or something.  ... do some situps. 

Good work!  Intersted in finishing it?

I liked the song and the music, but the hard panning saddens me. Your voice is very clear. I've been trying to mulri track my voice too, but I suck at singing in general. LoL. Much love towards this.