Also added today: Twirl 2.0, my first song made using computers, eventually. Just fixed the annoying hi-hat track, but yeah, anyway it is my first song, so patience

Hey WELL DONE
TWIRL WORKS WELL!!!!
and WELCOME 2 The AMP
check out yor master level when rendering to mp3 as this a bit on the quiet side..........

fantastic first track!!!!!
Very well done

The swordfish

I like the pads
 
The lead and drums are a bit lame though. Try experimenting with compressor settings on the drums, and replace that lead with a deep, squary bass.

Really good for a first song.

its pretty good especially for ur first try! id suggest making the drums a bit louder and addin a few more different drum beats. also welcome to bandamp!!`

Good job!!drum work is pretty cool...Nice feel on the layering!!Ya man welcome to the amp.I like the velocity selection on the snare!!Cool stuff....