couple friends recorded it in there  bathroom and i added the bass line about 5 years later

Very cool feel to it.interesting concept.I think it sounds more like a filtered part from a VST plugging.I guess it works for originality.The singing in itself is real good.I think this has a lot of potential to further develop.The bass line was hard to define it needs more bottom or volume or something...

yeah i know it lost alot when i mixed down to mp3.