This is a song that we made in about 5-6hours some guitar riffs were already found but the specials sounds that you can hear weren't ,also the chorus with guitar chords weren't found... The vocals aren't recorded yet but that version will come... Hope you guys can give us some advice

As i'm listening - enjoying the opening guitar riff.  Nice use of those little effects - sounds quite similar to the postal service in that respect.  Never a bad thing.  Maybe the clean guitar could be filled out a little more (how to do this though, is not my speciality; im sure someone else will leave a comment re that though).

Stick the right kind of vocals over this and i reckon that this could sound really cool.  Not that it isnt sounding great already.  Take this tune and run!

Kobeshi

all i can say is...abso brilliant.. it can easily be sang to.. great potential.. love the beat..guitaring is amazing.. xxx rated..x

So you have no vocals and you cant find the guitar, you still managed to keep enough over to have a pretty cool song,
Hey ! You found your guitar again......sounds very good.
Very cool idea for a song I'd also like to hear a good vocal over it.
Sorry but the rim shot sounds like a blind man having an epileptic fit with his stick, it dont sound right.
I'm impressed by the rest though.
Would that last melody not sound cooler as a sax? it could say just a little more than the synthy sound it is now.

This is a real good sounding track.I like the general layout and sound layering..It has a very sweet feel to it.Almost yearning like....Good show...

pretty cool, yeah i have to agree that the sound effects arnt my thing but it fits i guess

Thanks for the comments it's very nice to have positive feedback. Kings"Would that last melody not sound cooler as a sax? it could say just a little more than the synthy sound it is now" we made this song with ableton only the guitar riffs and the sound you hear in the end is a sax. But again thanks for all the comments...

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