Unfortunately, I know this song has many corrections in need. A few I can hear is some unwanted distortion. And I notice as I play with Fruity Loops Studio, that it doesn't handle sounds all too well at all, which is the actual reason of distortion. My boyfriend has a quad core setup with 4gbs of RAM, and somehow you still got that skippy sound when the cores weren't even at full load, and RAM wasn't even barely taken up. Which makes me think that FLS has some bugs needing to be panned out.

Anyways, I present to you a half decent song. I can no longer edit it because I do not have a good enough processor, nor enough RAM to do so.

Enjoy.

Very nice!!!  The distortion doesn't sound too bad.