For some reason this song record quietly so turn down your speakers when it's done.
just a warning.
I'm happy with the content just not the recording It's really fuzzy but that's how it will be until I can get something better.

Good song again..love the melody on the solo guitar.You have a good feel for song writting.I would really work on your recording quality.Its going to boost your music to the next level....Even thought it sounds awesome in this organic recording...

I think this really has a lot of potential in the making's...I agree with you """ I'm happy with the content just not the recording""""  But we have to work with what what we have....when and if you get better equipment to work with you should do this song once again...

I like the way it kicked in after being so mellow for a time...the ending is good also ...

Nice work..

Flyer

Will Rate

Mmmhmmm, I like the beginning.... nice quiet solo... quite soothing... ok, your voice just kicked in (just don't start screaming)... Bring up the volume on your voice a bit.  It sdounds like on this song and others by you that you are afraid to sing... are you (self-conscious?)?  Ok, the 2nd guitar just kicked in... nice harmony.  Ok, I'm not really sure of the meaning about the ending there, but maybe you should elaborate on that electric guitar part... (just don't start screaming).

When you get a real nice recording of this song, it's gonna blow people's minds. You've got to do that! This is one of your best when it's in its full glory

I just listend to this like 5 times (I couldnt get enough)
It is really beautiful. Cant wait to see a crisper version

sliding into a nice feel here... liking the vibe.... vocals are sweet... good harmony.... the feel is staying consistent, nothing punchy.... going good with my morning coffee and read... nice voice, hitting different notes.... I know we all strive for that studio sound but I actually dig lo-fi and so the recording sits with me just fine... I leave that for the tech junkies.... Sounds getting bigger and then there's that random streak of noise coming in and we're done.... didn't like the ending.... dug the rest very much!

Hao!

thanks for the feedback. LOL that random streak was me scream "star" into an empty dryer. I never intended it to be as loud as it came out. It was suppose to be in the background. But instead the whole song came out really quite except that part.

this is rolling round in my amp player...........
im just having a bit of a a problem pickin out the words
its nice and felt ............... but what r u singing about????
the vocal delivry just a bit too laid bak for my old ears..........
so fer me the mix doesnt quite work..........

Im getting some of it

but not all.............

the vocs need to be crystal........whatever style

I still vote it high!!!!

fish

you waited like a star, to shine light on someone.
just a little just enough, to warm skin almost numb.
you waited like a star.
a quick glance into your hiding, it's my attempt to your understanding.
nights spent outside your window they were perfect and honest too.
you have been like a star, entwine around me and driving far.
you've been so patient, burn bright my love.
you've been so patient, burn bright my star, burn bright my star.
and driving far.

I hope this helps since the vocals are so quite. 

Man, this is really good. Despite the bad sound quality, the composition is great.
Acoustic grunge. Your voice sounds perfect.
Get it recorded properly.

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