Tell me what you think of this one!!

This song is jam-packed with great features. Very original in its character. (fantastic "lopey" rhythm here...really arrests my attention). Good selection of guitar sounds. Great guitar rhythm, great leads and fills.(I really like the simple, but very melodic and tasteful guitar leads  - with just enough flamboyance to make them even more interesting). Vocals work really well. Great use of variation in the song (for example, the guitar doubles the voice at 0.48...just one example of creativity here). I've got just one question: is this all you? (writing lyrics, music, vocals, playing instruments and production?). If so, man, you show you've got it all!...I would definitely buy this one!.

Yes this a great bit of songwriting, it has everything.

Battlecat has mentioned most things, I want some elctronic drums, one day when I will have the space and money to get some.

The only thing I would say is to perhaps raise the the vox.

The outro guitar solo was great.

Rated

Denis

Thanks alot guys, and yes, it is all me!

Let's see... Jimi Hendrix riffs and the verse "Love potion number 9" comes to mind.  I like your voice.  I'd like to hear something else by you.

its great!! you are an impressive artist..love your voice and you play so excellently!! high rates..just brilliant!xxxxxxxxxx      

Wow...How did I miss this one for a bit..this has to be your best song..at least I think so..great timing..nice vocal delivery...good vocals...nice lead guitar...I'm deff going to download this and add it to my playlist...real nice work
I must say its one of the best songs that I like on here...this is my kinda music  although you wouldn't think so...but yeah , it is 

Nice work again....Shinube

Flyer

will rate

Well, thanks allot for your kind words everybody! I have to admit that I find it very difficult to adjust the vocals to the proper level! I always feel that there too loud, and in the end they're to quiet! I'm sure I'll figure it out in time, but does anybody have any suggestions?

I like this song.
It's got a great feel to it.

The bell on the cymbal seemed louder then the rest of the kit though.
But this is a great song I hope to hear more in the future.

liked the guitar rhythem and the solo at the end

Interesting signature count....Very of centered beat and it works great.....Very reminiscent of classic rock with a modern twist.The arrangements are great.....The guitar solo and detailing are top notch....good vocals....
This is real good stuff!!!        

Great chord structure. Wonderful guitar solo. The ride on the drums is a bit overbearing. Love the vocals.

it has sth of the very dark 60s
great story and great music

Vocals are a tad too 'naked' for me.  I love the guitar tones though.  The solos are great.  Wish it was just a tad longer too, hehe.

THIS IS SO AWESOME. Like Alice in Chains meets Oasis at the beginning. haha. The guitar progression is wicked awesome. jamming sometime? on this song. Friggin tank man. way to go!!