I keep writing songs for my friend to sing, but he doesn't seem interrested yet, so here's my newest..

 Love Ya World...

 MSR 2008

How far do you want to go.....?
A little further I hope!
You know I'm a fan, I love your style, your talent and your 'Art'.
I dont understand how anyone else could really sing your lyrics like you do. You understand them and you put them in just the right place. Yet it is your 'expression' that needs to be mastered here, some of your vocals tent to distort as you 'express' more.
I expected the hi-hat to stop and break out into something amazing .... but it didn't happen :[
It just keeps it continuous. You 'jump around' more than this usually!
I'd say the lyrics are excellent but the construct needs to be more dynamic and it needs to be loads longer!

Yup your a great song writer.I really like the way the song builds but like Kings mention id hope for a bit of more drumming and longer length song..This is total hit if structured right and dynamics are properly set.Another potentially amazing track from you man ,this is great!!!!

Your vocals get loud in some areas... try to stay equal volume or mix better.

Also, I would take out the second time you say "That's when you know (inaudible - you've won?)"  Leaving it hang after the first time you say it will help to create some breathing room and something for the listener to think about before you start singing again.

At about 1:30 in the song you get a-little too excited.  Got ants in your pants?  Sounds like you're in a rush to say alot.

All-in-all, I think you need to calm down a-bit and rethink the song.  It can be worked out though.  Keep it up!

Nice intro.

The overall projection is great, very nice piano.

I like the tone of your vox, they have a live feel.

Are you recording the vox with compression as apposed to adding them after, that will take care of the volume issue, and dont forget to breath.

Yes it's abit short, perhaps you could add some of your lovely Ivories.

Rated

Denis

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swordfish: loved it
swordfish: begging to go further .......................... haha
swordfish: its an organic development
swordfish: work it up or down as you see fit
swordfish: you have a great break opportunity to take it further
swordfish: how far do you want to go .........
swordfish: when the song asks the question..........
swordfish: the sweep sound is booming at me
swodfish: clear as a bell
swordfish: your voice is very good
swordfish: but then it finishes ...........
swordfish: mount this is very good
swordfish: maybe its my phones
swordfish: sounds well organised
swordfish: cant turn it up loud without booming
swordfish: bassy
swordfish:
swordfish: i listen 2 MSR
swordfish: hi mount

START HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA

vocal track is full of plops..... at p's, t's, and k's
and I am waiting for fat drum intro at 1:40 so that the song starts at least with a full arrangement
fantastic sound
words and lyrics are ok
melody line is brilliant
to me the song is unfinished

Technicalities aside, the song has a good chance to go somewhere....gotta learn how to balance yourself with that mic a bit better, let you pic up that range and not pop so much... we do what we can with what we've got, but you can still manage the mic a bit better... sounding good....


Yi Ban Ban....