Work in progress.. got a bit of writers block! Advice on where to go next please!

This is a pretty decent tune!  The whole thing seems just a bit in the back, though.  A few fixes to the overall mix and this is sounding good!  Nice work!

Nice production ...............WIP
If u stuck for lyrics starting place ........... Try 'Kings' he's very lyrical got me out of a corner once or twice
http://www.kingsonone.com/
If you need lyrics as a start point he's a very lyrical wordsmith and I like his stuff.......sounds like a simple recommendation but visit his site and decide.

Splash

Nice work.I like the combination of elements here.Sounds well put together.I really enjoyed the delay type fx on the Guitar.Some well organized building layers keeping the song integrity.Good job!!!!