VOX PLEASE!






Thanks,
                Jay

sounds like a great ballad in the making..  some really good vocals would make this soar.

Like the slow mellow feel to this.

Replace the hi-hat with a ride[ maybe in just some of the parts] it was just a feeling I got.

Have you got any lyrics???

Denis

sounds cool, maybe u could double time the drum track in some parts, like when the heavy guitar comes in around 1:20. the drums just sounds a bit constant and flat. all the other instrumentation is spot on imo. look forward to hearing someone sing on this

Ian

Cool song man!Lots of mellow feel on it!
Hope you get someone soon.The drums are bit flat for my taste but in general like goat said a god vox will make this track soar!

I like the tune.It's very cool!

Thanks everyone, yeah the drums suck BALLS...I guess I'll just have to give Neil Peart a call, then re do everything...give Jon Bon Jovi a call and then I'll have a hit!

it was realy good. just the drums need some work- like other people have said. cant wait to hear the vocals with it. 

I gotta say this is pretty sweet...   I definitely want to hear this with some vox...   So, get to singing biiotch

            


 As for critiques go, right now, just the needing of vox, that's about it... I aint gunna keep harping on what everyone else has, so since it's already been addressed, I'm just gunna say, get to voxing baby...

                JimK