#1December 27th, 2007 · 01:18 AM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Cynic
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This song is not in a battle


A song about..uh...cynicism.
Very much inspired by the late '90s-early '00s postgrunge band Puddle of Mudd.

Lyrics:
Iím feeling like telling you something
Something thatís been on my mind
Donít you look at my face
I want you to Look inside
And youíre starting to smile
But Iím wanting you to frown
I wish you knew my desire
So I could let it drown
And canít you see
That youíre bothering me
I just want you to feel
A little more like

Meeeeeeee
A little more like me
My perspective
Itís better on the ground
To think negatively
Seeeeee
A little more like me
My connections
Itís better to be bored
And cynical
Weeeeeee
Need a little more fear
Some understanding
Some rationality
And Iím wanting to
Think
Optimistically
But itís harder now
To live with my head in the sand

Everything that you tell me
Seems like such a sham
Iím wishing for something exciting
Something with a bam
And Youíre taking the easy road
And Youíre living your life bland
I feel Iím growing sicker
When wave your hand
And youíre talking in circles
Like a traffic jam
I wish that youíd think darker
A little more like

Meeeeeeee
A little more like me
My perspective
Itís better on the ground
To think negatively
Seeeeee
A little more like me
My connections
Itís better to be bored
And cynical

You can't take away
My intuition
You can't take away
My own position
You can't make me feel
Your own feelings
Your bitter pill
Is not your decision

You can't take away
My intuition
You can't take away
My own position
You can't make me feel
Your own feelings
Your bitter pill
Isn't your decision

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#2December 27th, 2007 · 02:00 AM
27 threads / 2 songs
179 posts
Canada
nice tune. Very well put together, was fun to listen to. The weeeee and seeee parts etc, could have had more umph. Seemed like you held back a bit on those. Other than that good tunes, good lyrics...good overall!
thx
-Mark
#3December 27th, 2007 · 11:50 AM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
Great lyrics...  Well put together.  Great job.
#4December 27th, 2007 · 12:22 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
dustyskates wrote…
nice tune. Very well put together, was fun to listen to. The weeeee and seeee parts etc, could have had more umph. Seemed like you held back a bit on those. Other than that good tunes, good lyrics...good overall!
thx
-Mark

Yes, I wanted to scream it but unfortunately I was recording vocals at midnight and didn't want to wake anybody up.
#5December 27th, 2007 · 03:50 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
327 posts
United Kingdom
lol about not wanting to wake anyone..bother that! get on with it..it has a good vibe and could be a screamers desire..the whole song is awsome! you have a good voice.I love the way you have put it all together..the lyrics are brill! am rating...xxx
#6December 27th, 2007 · 09:22 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
re: Cynic
u have voice very like petermoncrief
which is wierd??????????

but this trak very very good

love the clear vocs over the guitar mush

HEY THIS IS A GREAT TRAK

Very High VOTE

haha
Von Splash miester...........das Fish
der sploosh
#7December 29th, 2007 · 03:03 PM
51 threads / 33 songs
292 posts
Canada
Great
This song is awesome...

Keep it up, hope to hear more of this!

          --XFactor--
#8December 29th, 2007 · 03:46 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
I like the intro and general melody.The lyrics are awesome.The voice gets out of tune when you push hard.Your voice is fairly unique and I think a potentially great voice to to have something serious going and further develop.The tuning is something that can be addressed with more practice.Some frequencies are a bit overloaded  in the mix ,but the arrangements are great.The harmony works nicely!
#9December 30th, 2007 · 12:12 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
great song. evrything is really cool and works well, particuarly the drums in the verses, the toms sound cool... You could try doubling up youre vox on the meeee and seeee parts to give them more power without screaming. yeah, great lyrics

good job

Ian
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