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Hi guys
Please comment on this *very* early, raw guitar concept track, called 'If our dreams had wings'.
Yes, I know it sounds naff (quick recording and mastered with cheap headphones cos my speakers are broke). I also know that the playing isn't perfect as it is just one take (missed notes, improv, and the harmonics need some work too).
However, what I want most is compositional comments. Do you like the song? Want it to be a track for our new band.
Thanks all :D:D
Please comment on this *very* early, raw guitar concept track, called 'If our dreams had wings'.
Yes, I know it sounds naff (quick recording and mastered with cheap headphones cos my speakers are broke). I also know that the playing isn't perfect as it is just one take (missed notes, improv, and the harmonics need some work too).
However, what I want most is compositional comments. Do you like the song? Want it to be a track for our new band.
Thanks all :D:D
hmmmmmm, I say yes to this as well...I actually would slow down the tempo a bit though...I think the groove is lost at the current tempo...not much slower ...5-10 bpm maybe?
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