Hi guys

Please comment on this *very* early, raw guitar concept track, called 'If our dreams had wings'.

Yes, I know it sounds  naff (quick recording and mastered with cheap headphones cos my speakers are broke). I also know that the playing isn't perfect as it is just one take (missed notes, improv, and the harmonics need some work too).

However, what I want most is compositional comments. Do you like the song? Want it to be a track for our new band.

Thanks all :D:D

hmmmmmm, I say yes to this as well...I actually would slow down the tempo a bit though...I think the groove is lost at the current tempo...not much slower ...5-10 bpm maybe?

Well I gotta say Very nice, however like the post before me, I believe you need to slow it down a bit. Good Stuff keep it comin

Im cool with the tempo, I hear where you going .I think when all is putt together Bass ,drums ,etc,it should  come out awesome!!!!I like it!

This has some serious  Hard rock to it...I like this kind of Music...But I cant really play as well as you do.....But, I sure like to listen to it...Ill be looking to hear  final version....

Flyer


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