Here's another rough recording.  It is unfinished we just tried to wing it.  Guitar was off.  What image if any does this bring to the mind and the emotions?  There are more lyrics but I am not done and didn't sing any of them.

Clock in , clock out

upstairs, down , and back again

I'm headlong into a spin

Upheaval clouds my mind

He said I should always remember

He said I should I learn to wait until

He told me never to go there
never to....



You know you shouldn't have stolen

all these years.

You know you shouldn't have....

Cus I try , I try but I can't run

fast enough from what you've done

fast enough from what you've done

So tired of weeping without tears

Just painted smiles for 16 years

Just painted smiles these 16 years

It's justice for my nemesis

Blood is my demand

It's justice for my nemesis

a pistol's in my hand

........and all the things I can't control

Your vox are awesome, they really cut through big time, with a great tone.

Not bad for a live recording, quality wise.

Just thought the intro was a little streched.

Keep 'em comin' dude.

Rated

Denis

gosh your voice is fantastic! this song is awsome..you have a brilliant voice.it does something to me..i have to have your song on my faves...heyyy thankyou.. amazing..high rates here..abso love it....xxxx

it was good and it made me rock me head it is just that the organ player was a little over powering but it is a rough rec so a am sure the it will get 5 in the long run.

Yes, your vocals are great! The song is very cool. What mic do you use live?

I didn't like the keys. Your vox and the rhygit was very tasty. But the keys just killed it for me.

I wish I could sing, man!