Sorry for double posts of crappy recorded pieces after being away for so long it has been a wild year.  This is a Rough practice of a new unfinished song I was working on before we had to disband.  I have about 40 more of these and feel like I am going insane if I don't finish them.  Watch volume before 56 secs !!!  I don't have many lyrics but I have the emotional setting and feel.  It needs slide guitar more lyrics, some flonase, claritin D, and a new band.  Suggestions and criticism welcome (not a finished product rather preliminary idea.

Very raw...very passionate! I love the intensity of this (even in its raw form). Also love the strong dynamics of this (loud versus soft) Even in it's formative stages, its easy to see the skillful construction of this song. Love the vocals. I look forward to hearing this song as it develops. By the way, I'm also interested to see how you plan to use slide guitar in this...

nice live recording... I love live recordings
they always show the skills of a band

Very good vocal melody.The guitar part in the beginning sounds great.Wpould love to hear with a better sound production!!!
Good job!!!!
To bad about the disband!

Shame this a dead band.........
sounds like your s**t together at the time
but now no more???

OK move on

Good Luck

The Fish

Get the band back together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This has the making of quality stuff.

Come on do it, get on the phone or go and visit the members, if all else fails form another band and finish what you started. It's going to be worth it for sure.

LOVE THE VOX.

Denis

ooohhhhh i like this!....your great.. guitar is amazing!..your voice is just perfect..the song is brilliant..its amazing how a voice conjurs up an image..lol....wow! will rate