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Sorry for the long delay between songs, but I've been extremely busy.
This song was musically inspired by a Temple of the Dog song and the lyrics are loosely based a traumatic experience I had at the age of 7 while sailing on the lake.
My first real song after taking guitar lessons for about a month.
This song was musically inspired by a Temple of the Dog song and the lyrics are loosely based a traumatic experience I had at the age of 7 while sailing on the lake.
My first real song after taking guitar lessons for about a month.
ohhh a great feel, tho this is so sad...i am thinking this is the best way to put an experience down.. music obviously is your way......i can think everyone can relate in a way to your experience now...you have expressed it well. and your music composition is amazing..love the guitar.xxxx wow! brilliant..xxxxxx rated
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Um Vocal style, as always amazing. Good riffs well compliemtned instrumentation. I dunno if your cadence was always the way you wanted it to be. I listened to it again to find the part that it really struck out at me so I could mark the time but I guess it wasn't to bad because I missed it the second time through. ALLRIGHT. Good luck!
If you toured, I'd come to your shows. Be a little bitchy fanboy. SIGN MY CD, OMG!!!!!
Um Vocal style, as always amazing. Good riffs well compliemtned instrumentation. I dunno if your cadence was always the way you wanted it to be. I listened to it again to find the part that it really struck out at me so I could mark the time but I guess it wasn't to bad because I missed it the second time through. ALLRIGHT. Good luck!
i thought that the music was well produced-- i was very happy with it.
the track is a little repetative, but it's okay. it wasn't painful or anything! I didn't really think the song had much resolution to it, that it was rather a single-instance-in-time song. i guess that's not a problem, if that's what you're going for. tons of popular songs have absolutely no progression in them at all. heck, that's how you get on the radio. you write a song that doesn't necesarily go anyplace, but it's catchy
sorry, i'm not knocking on your song--- really. i just got carried away :P
I like it, though I'll say that I think the vocals need a little more.. power or something behind them. they sound a little thin or something... perhaps not confident enough? I'm not sure. It's really just a matter of finding that perfect vocal strength for each unique song. it's tough sometimes.
again, good stuff, my friend.
the track is a little repetative, but it's okay. it wasn't painful or anything! I didn't really think the song had much resolution to it, that it was rather a single-instance-in-time song. i guess that's not a problem, if that's what you're going for. tons of popular songs have absolutely no progression in them at all. heck, that's how you get on the radio. you write a song that doesn't necesarily go anyplace, but it's catchy
sorry, i'm not knocking on your song--- really. i just got carried away :P
I like it, though I'll say that I think the vocals need a little more.. power or something behind them. they sound a little thin or something... perhaps not confident enough? I'm not sure. It's really just a matter of finding that perfect vocal strength for each unique song. it's tough sometimes.
again, good stuff, my friend.
Thanks for the replies!
Yes, its repetitiveness is a product of the way I recorded it: I came up with a beginning hook, then recorded the entire guitar part making it up as I went and repeating phrases that I thought sounded neat, then I built the entire song around that. Unfortunately I repeated too much and didn't leave enough time for more verses.
Yes, its repetitiveness is a product of the way I recorded it: I came up with a beginning hook, then recorded the entire guitar part making it up as I went and repeating phrases that I thought sounded neat, then I built the entire song around that. Unfortunately I repeated too much and didn't leave enough time for more verses.
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