was in the mood fore some dnb hardcore stuff,,,,

Pretty cool stuff, lots of weird synths in there! Would think it could use a bit more, consistent, "pounding" drums, to make it really club-suitable. This is music to dance to, and dance requires a kicking drive that challenges you. Still pretty cool though.. The dark, eery break is really great. Awesome atmosphere ... Will rate

Interesting use of sounds, quite original I think.

PX already mentioned the drums, so yeah a little work on the drums and you'll have us all Dancin'

Will Rate

Denis

Fucking great,..really dark atmosphere  which i love,..haven't got any critic,..its perfect to me!!

Nice, not sure I would call this out and out DnB, but its close enough.  there is a sound you used in here that is creating a hiss... unfortunate.  Like your style, rather random.  Good show!

I'm on a quest to post on all of the songs on the main page of the audio review forum that had the fewest posts   It's your lucky day!

I agree with puppetxeno-- this has got some dance potential   now, i'm a terrible dancer myself, being a average-height red-head in Computer Science, but I could see this strking up people's moves!

I agree about the base/drum--- it would be great if there was a super punchy drum beat going on to drive those dancers out to the floor

  Not bad!  I like it, and I'm usually not into the more abstract of tracks on here.  you've earned a place on my playlist, actually!  it makes good background music for surfing the web late at night

TLS

ps-- actually, i began learning some breakdance stuff, but i've left it strewn to my side for too long.. i probably suck at it now.

thanx guys....i made some edits in the track...it was toooo long and the hizsss in the track ..that on purpose..its part of the melody line..which is build from one noise sample which i pitched at some parts so it become an melodic bass line

Nice work, lovin this tune, original sounds, nice break, maybe add some disto to drums or layer up some heavier hits to get it to punch through the rest of the mix, but all in all good stuff