that boogie rhythm doesnt fit the song... but freedom for the artist..
fantastic ambient... floydish... very similar sound
I am almost waiting for a vocal line...
fantastic ambient... floydish... very similar sound
I am almost waiting for a vocal line...
like this very much |
i like the way it comes together...guess the drums do portay what you wanted...sorta blues.. i do get that feeling..brilliant... different.. but brilliant..
yeah |
I agree one hundred percent... This song is awesome, except that drum track... totally wrong for it...
Dude, COuld you end me this without the drums? I wouldn't mind playing with some ideas...
Anyway, gets a rating from me for the overall effort... and that is still a good rating, would be gettting 100 if the drum track matched better...
JimK
Dude, COuld you end me this without the drums? I wouldn't mind playing with some ideas...
Anyway, gets a rating from me for the overall effort... and that is still a good rating, would be gettting 100 if the drum track matched better...
JimK
Though this song should represent what you wanted to express i agree with everyone about the drums. Though, the rest is perfect. Has a really nice atmosphere. Great job
Drop the drums totally. Guitar style is my kind. Love it. Nice and slow, "I aint in a hurry" feel to it. reminds me of a tune from Pink Floyd's More album. Forget the name, but you catch my drift. Keep it up, and get yourself a drummer to do the drums part, or some new loops... or take it our completely, it should work super-well.
This song is pretty neat. A great mix indeed. I agree with dropping the drums. This is not the type of the song you should have percussion in. However, if you need percussion to make a song, use it, then drop it for this type of music. I know I can't make a song without percussion sometimes.
Nice Atmosphere |
First off the negatives: The production could be better. The clipping tracks and robotic drum tracks let it down. The clipping is easily avoided and the drums really are "guitarist drums", ie. don't sound natural.
Ok good points: In my opinion this tracks good points far outweigh the bad. The atmosphere is beautiful all the way through and the guitar is lovely in both tone and style.. except for the clipping. The whole track has such a mellow and moody feel to it and everything melds together very well to make a realy nice track which I enjoyed listening to. Would like to hear more.
J.
Ok good points: In my opinion this tracks good points far outweigh the bad. The atmosphere is beautiful all the way through and the guitar is lovely in both tone and style.. except for the clipping. The whole track has such a mellow and moody feel to it and everything melds together very well to make a realy nice track which I enjoyed listening to. Would like to hear more.
J.
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