Well here's my third song. Made this usin fl studio as wel. Infact thats the only software im familiar with at the moment, and that too just barely. but hey, its not the tools you use, its the music right?... anyways here's "someday" and im trying to get my cousin to replace the lousy 3xosc starting from 0:45 with her voice. But before that need to get cracking with some lyrics. So basically still a long ways from finished.

Do you play guitar? I'm sure that Organ sound could be more 'live' / 'real' , it's sounds a bit blocky, if you brought the melody in on the guitar or 'naturalized' the sound it would be really cool.
You have a bass sound the clips and distorts sometimes, needs EQing !!
But I do like your song it's really cool and chilled.
The piano loop sound familiar , it reminds me of 'Underground' or some chilled techno band like that!

but the basics of this song are clear..
go and do the vocals... would love to hear them...
needs a highlight like a chorus.. and maybe some different drumsounds..
all in all a nice tune

yeah this has a lot of potential.. it's good now and the mix is decent.. love to hear it when it's finished

greg

great stuff..i agree about the tools. although it does help to have them of course.. your music is brilliant...all fits in very well.. quite a chilled atmosphere to it..x

I like the synth sounds. All you need to work on now (which is important for FL) is how to use the studio side of it to sculpt your sound. Work on EQ on the various elements to remove offending frequencies (such as the nasal tone of that organ). You also need to use compression on the overall mix.

I really like the melodies you have layered together composition-wise.