Paganscradle,Denis..Flyer

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Paganscradle__Vox
Denis__Bass/Percussion
Flyer_Lyrics/Acoustic's/Synth/Vox

The 2nd Version with Paganscradle's vox added

Thank you both for doing a oustanding job on this project....Looking forward to doing more !!!!

Flyer

Please leave a comment to let us know what you think...

Flyer




"When Your Falling"


Verse 1
Baby is that you I hear calling out my
name
it has to be your voice
because your voice drive's me
it drive's me insane

Verse 2
oh theses games my mind play's
thinking I hear you
when I know your
far away
far away
far away

Chorus
I made a promise
When your falling
When your falling
I'd be there
when your falling I'd be there
there to catch you
Baby when your falling
when your falling
when your falling

Verse 3
Now all I have are these old City time
Sight's
And the tears I hold back instead of
fighting them at night
with dream's of you
that I invite

Verse 4
I promise to turn all my wrong's into
right's
I think of you
as I walk with the City Street Lights
that I travel some nights more than twice

Chorus
I made a promise
When your falling
When your falling
I'd be there
when your falling I'd be there
there to catch you

bridge

Verse 5
Baby is that you calling out my name
oh theses games my mind play's
I promise to turn all my wrong's into
right's
I walk with the City Street Lights
some nights more than twice
more than twice

End

Dooo Dooo Doooo
La La La La
Bop A dooo
Bopa doo dooo dooo


Lyrics By
Flyer

I want to thank flyer and dennis too,as this is a great song to sing to.I have enjoyed singing it...more please flyer........xxxxxxxx   ...look forward to it....xxx

Thank you Pagan...Denis..Nice job you 2 ... very nice

I have more on the way Pagan...just give me a day or 2

Flyer

I really like this... the way the vocals are done are great... wow  very cool .... the music is very tight........................ nice sounding mix too..   has a nice live feel to it ...

gets high vote from me

Thanks Goat...Marino posted on the other version that he noticed a warping sound...does anyone hear a warping sound on this version ?

Thanks again Goatman

Flyer

I think i hear what he is talking about.  Its making the backing music sound warbled or something?  Hmmm.... nothing sounds exactly "clear" on this one? Which, for me, is very unfortunate.  This may be your best yet Flyer! 
Great job on the concept, itself.  It has great potential, but im hearing serious issues.  Whats funny is I cant put my finger on it yet.  The mix is very cluttered sounding to me.  It may just be a matter of careful mixing on this one. I would say, off hand , that there is far too much reverb on the mix, which is mushing all the sounds together.  Just an opinion.  Anyone, that reads my reviews, knows that Im not a big fan of reverb.  Reverb causes a sound to take up too much room in the mix and when everything has a little reverb on it, you end up with a mush soup.  Not saying that is the case here, Ill just say that it feels like all the sounds are competing with eachother for space.  Im not usually so wordy in a review, but this one has got great potential. The mix needs work to make this one shine but it just needs to be polished.  Great job, guys!  i love it! Keep working on it!


P.S i came back and relistened and there is definately some kind of warbling going on?

Hey Minds..Thanks for the great input..I think I may have added to much re verb...that's a good point about the re verb..I'll have to keep that in mind...I really hate to lose this song here...everyone put so much time and effort into it...I'll see what I can do or possibly see if someone can mix it for me..I do have all the tracks...I may have to ask Denis for a separate(s) tracks on the bass an percussion...I hate to do that  ..cause I know the time he put into it..plus I know he has a full schedule...But..once again Tom...thanks so much buddy...Ill see what I can do with this one

Flyer

maybe it is a bit on the reverb side..i have used some affects..may have dostorted somehow.,could perhaps sing on this again..flyer?

I think what may have happened is that we all used reverb on our tracks..and when I mixed everything...it got distorted...I'm all for giving this one another go..If you want to re-do the vox Haley, that's fine with me...and Denis if you want to redo the bass and percussion..I'm all for it...this time when the tracks are sent to me for mixing...do not use reverb on your tracks...because Ill add the reverb to the final cut...so...what do you say...Denis...Haley ?
I say lets get it right !!!!!

Flyer

Love it you guys!
Just that dang warble in their,and I can hear the reverb a bit.
Other than that,not many complaints from the peanut gallery!
High vote!
and I hope to hear much more from you guys soon!

lol   the peanut gallery is coollllllllllllll...lol
thanks Chy...I think we are going to redo it and get it right

Flyer

i agree we do it again..xx..xx..