#1September 16th, 2007 · 04:27 PM
49 threads / 42 songs
493 posts
United Kingdom
Your Identity with Vocals

This song is not in a battle

Hi all

This is the next version of Your Identity with vocals

Still needs the drums programmed... but will do that soon!

All opinions welcome


Dave and James

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#2September 17th, 2007 · 08:49 AM
2 threads / 1 songs
17 posts
Well i like it.. The voice ist awesome and the music are perfect... Im intresting in next songs
#3September 17th, 2007 · 10:13 AM
77 threads / 59 songs
923 posts
sounds very good Dave, like the song, and the singin too, guitar is very neat too.love the solo
just bit missing dynamic in the heavier parts, and some warmth in the vocs maybe?
drums a bit straight bt you mentioned that, hope to hear them more dynamic too.
congrats, i wait with a vote of course
#4September 17th, 2007 · 01:27 PM
188 threads / 27 songs
2,829 posts
cool composition and very good performance. drums sound like a loop from a machine... good work with vocals and guitars. but guitar in the chorus sounds bit dirty to me. awesome solo. what about the ending? man you need a real drummer. anyway good job. one thumb up!
#5September 17th, 2007 · 02:18 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,387 posts
United Kingdom
Nice fat sound, solid.

I must agree with the vox mix sound, it sounds it has a lot of middle, is that intentional , what are you puting it through??. It would be great to find a way of smoothing it up.Your singing in tune and the music is fine?

Nice guitar solo.

Good composition.

I will vote when you have finished it.

Good job.

#6September 17th, 2007 · 02:54 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
cool cool. im reminded of 'at the drive in', is that coincidence?

very good, just need some proper beats

#7September 17th, 2007 · 03:24 PM
49 threads / 42 songs
493 posts
United Kingdom
hey guys thanks for all the comments!

yes I spotted the extra mids on the vox... I dialled them in that way to give a bit more clarity in the mix but maybe I'll just cut and increase the volume!

ive also increased the volume in the heavier parts and cut the clean guitars a tiny bit in the verses so that should help a little.

and yes I know I need to do the drums. it is just a straight drum loop we recorded to, haven't done them yet. may get my mate's MIDI drum kit round.
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