Hi all

This is the next version of Your Identity with vocals

Still needs the drums programmed... but will do that soon!

All opinions welcome

Thanks

Dave and James

Well i like it.. The voice ist awesome and the music are perfect... Im intresting in next songs

sounds very good Dave, like the song, and the singin too, guitar is very neat too.love the solo
just bit missing dynamic in the heavier parts, and some warmth in the vocs maybe?
drums a bit straight bt you mentioned that, hope to hear them more dynamic too.
congrats, i wait with a vote of course

cool composition and very good performance. drums sound like a loop from a machine... good work with vocals and guitars. but guitar in the chorus sounds bit dirty to me. awesome solo. what about the ending? man you need a real drummer. anyway good job. one thumb up!

Nice fat sound, solid.

I must agree with the vox mix sound, it sounds it has a lot of middle, is that intentional , what are you puting it through??. It would be great to find a way of smoothing it up.Your singing in tune and the music is fine?

Nice guitar solo.

Good composition.

I will vote when you have finished it.

Good job.

Denis

cool cool. im reminded of 'at the drive in', is that coincidence?

very good, just need some proper beats

Ian

hey guys thanks for all the comments!

yes I spotted the extra mids on the vox... I dialled them in that way to give a bit more clarity in the mix but maybe I'll just cut and increase the volume!

ive also increased the volume in the heavier parts and cut the clean guitars a tiny bit in the verses so that should help a little.

and yes I know I need to do the drums. it is just a straight drum loop we recorded to, haven't done them yet. may get my mate's MIDI drum kit round.