#1September 15th, 2007 · 06:01 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Carry Me
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This song is not in a battle


Spent pretty much all day writing and recording this song (instead of doing my homework like I should have).

I took way too many takes on this song, so I just interpolated the best of them and mashed them together. Overall there are about 5 separate guitar tracks on this song, with about two takes for all of them, and the vocals are quadruple-tracked (which unfortunately makes them sound muddy)

But overall, I like this song much more than I thought I would.

Lyrics:
Sometimes I donít feel like walking
Cause Iím not that fast
How I wish youíd carry me
Cause Iím too small
See everything that I can see
fade away

I fade away
Yeah

Tried to be a man
Tried to understand
always ruled by somebody else
Wished for childhood
Hoping that somebody would
Wonít you Carry me
Wonít you Carry me
Wonít you Carry me
Yeah yeah yeah

I canít deal
I canít cope
I canít live anymore
I canít change
Canít embrace anymore
I canít deal
I canít Cope
I canít live anymore
I canít change
I canít embrace anymore

Thought I was so smart
Thought I could take part
Tried to be myself
But I came right off the shelf
Wonít you Carry me
Wonít you Carry me
Wonít you Carry me
Yeah yeah yeah

Iím not feeling well
Sometimes Iím in hell
Iím not strong enough
Iíve got too much stuff


I canít deal
I canít cope
I canít live anymore
I canít change
Canít embrace anymore
I canít Cope
I canít live anymore
I canít change
I canít embrace anymore

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#2September 15th, 2007 · 06:33 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
i love the lyrics dude. your song writing is just getting better and better.
 some oposing harmonies in the bridge and/or chorus would sound cool.
 I like the synth
it could sound tidier, but overall, a very good song.

voted

Ian
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