Without effect (acoustic version)

Innocent creature who escapes from a dream
You came into my life and I let you go

I don´t want to trap you
I don´t want cheat on you

Because you´re beautiful
You are my butterfly
You are like an abyss
I don´t want fo fall down

I let myself fall down

I´m not thinking about escaping to your illusions
I don´t want to lose myself in the confusions

I don´t want to trap you
I don´t want cheat on you

Because you´re beautiful
You are my butterfly
You are like an abyss
I don´t want fo fall down

I let myself fall down

I let myself fall...

.: Sorry about my english again :.

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I think the intro is too long and I dont like that cheap sounding synth. Infinitely better when the vocals come in! I like this song, and the guitars have a nice wide sound. The drums sound ok, too

El trabajo de las voces está muy bien man, lo que dijo el pana anterior, está muy correcto, tienes que reducir el tiempo del intro.

La letra está bastante bien...en líneas generales está bien trabajada.

I agree with both Dave and Hurdaca, though we must use English to post on here please..

 This is the rules of Bandamp.... but, yes, the intro is too long, and cheap sounding.... The vocals sound very good as Hurdaca pointed out...  harmonies are tight....though the ending is abrupt...  would like to hear this re-worked a bit..

registre por favor otra vez una introducción mejor este y de repost., no tan de largo.


   The song itself is pretty cool......   
                             JimK

Well, the work is well done. Not my style, but this sounds good, though the voice is weak.
The instrumentation is ok. The ending is really abrupt. Liked the intro; it's ok that way.

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