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#1June 10th, 2005 · 04:50 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
7 posts
Argentina
Deformed teenager
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Score: 67.5%
Rank: 32st
Battle: 2005-08


Deformed teenager (Deforme adolescente) Grunge Punk

The world keeps going round
My nights are still eternal
I can´t rest
I see everything is falling down

I see without watching
I speak without thinking

It´s over! I´m going to vanish
Here I am... deformed teenager
I´m gonna wake up.

So... you keep growing older
You know: I´m affraid of time
and you know why...
yes, you know why.

I see without watching
I speak without thinking

It´s over! I´m going to vanish
Here I am... deformed teenager
I´m gonna wake up.

[Sorry about my English]

http://www.letmebleed.8k.com

http://www.pasandohambre.com.ar

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#2June 21st, 2005 · 10:10 AM
117 threads / 20 songs
1,422 posts
United States of America
hey, i kind of like it.  i think it'd be cool to hear this with the tempo turned up a little bit.

the guitar parts aren't very comlicated, but it still sounds nice.  i like the part when it gets quiet and soft
#3June 21st, 2005 · 12:25 PM
119 threads / 90 songs
258 posts
United Kingdom
great! except the ending was kinda abrupt...? and great comeback to Rusty too, lol
#4July 22nd, 2005 · 01:18 AM
31 threads / 5 songs
178 posts
Spain
El canción me gusta.

Me encanta tu respuesta a Rusty!!!!
#5July 23rd, 2005 · 06:56 PM
37 posts
United States of America
I like it, you got grunge down.  The vocals during the quiet part might be a little too quiet and I agree with PorcelianDoll about the ending, it doesn't sound intentional. Over all though, very good.
#6August 1st, 2005 · 01:13 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Nirvana fans perhaps?Actually who isn't? lol.Not bad guys.Why is Rusty even aloud to post anything? 0 songs+13 negative posts = no talent.I would love to hear something from him.Wait I forgot........doesn't have the talent or the balls to be criticized
#7August 2nd, 2005 · 05:59 AM
49 threads / 42 songs
493 posts
United Kingdom
It's pretty cool, definitely like this track. Production was pretty good until the vocals come in at the verse - might wanna work on that. Apart from this, it's a cool track I love the guitar.
#8August 3rd, 2005 · 02:17 PM
9 threads
98 posts
United States of America
great song! I just wish I knew what you were saying, like I know the lyrics but I could get emotion more out of it if I spoke the language. lol
#9August 3rd, 2005 · 08:13 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
31 posts
United States of America
i only give criticism, so why not
it sounds good, but still amateur, vocals need a little work, obvious production flaws.

dunno, sound good, with a little work, that would be a pretty good song.
#10August 4th, 2005 · 12:52 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
6 posts
Albania
back in home country we hear many song like this. it get us very excited to the top. We enjoy and be have fun. many thankful. love love night

emben & bjorn
#11August 6th, 2005 · 04:15 PM
7 threads / 3 songs
47 posts
United Kingdom
ok so it is grunge but....
ok i understand that this is grunge but still, i doesnt seem to have much of its own unique sound, i mean i know its been written to fit a genre type but it doesnt have anything that marks it out from all the other would-be nirvanas and silverchairs out there sorry 
#12August 10th, 2005 · 04:17 AM
6 threads / 5 songs
43 posts
Venezuela
Suramérica da la talla
Hey man!, me gusta la canción. Hay una falla pequeña en un tiempo, pero está muy bien grabada la canción. Las guitarras, bien ensambladas. En fin, una buena canción, aunque le falta algo...
#13August 12th, 2005 · 09:38 AM
189 threads / 27 songs
2,834 posts
Germany
Not my style, but a great production. You'd made it! Thanks for this transmission
#14August 12th, 2005 · 11:11 AM
6 threads / 4 songs
19 posts
United States of America
pretty good. never heard grunge in spanish before. i'd try making a better melody for the verses though.
#15August 14th, 2005 · 12:17 PM
3 posts
Austria
nice
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