thank you minds at play for your help enjoy
N.K.H


Why can’t we get along?
Show that we care
We have the thought
Yet no action
We just keep peace in mind
 
Many men have died
Leaving loved ones behind
We have the will
We have the power
Yet we just keep peace in mind

Make the thought
a powerful action
That kills no man
Stop the conflict
Put down your sword
This is the way to end this war

Nice little song here!  Great message in the lyrics.  Turn the vox up some, i cant hear it!  Overall, very nice.

Woa nice lyrics an message Patt.Bring those vocals up !!!
Cool vibe man!

very nice
vox up just a bit,maybe guitar a little down?
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Love the raw feel to this, great lyrics man.

I'm assuming that you sung this live, I think the volumes are not bad between the guitar and vox, just cut the bass down on the vox mic by about 5 or 6 Db[I hope you've got two mic's, one for guitar and one for the vox, not to mention a mixer, it's never endeing] .

The guitar sounds OK.

Best to record the vox separate if you can, then you can ocbviously play with thg mix.

More like this please, LOVE IT RAW!!

Cheers

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Denis

i like this style. i would like to hear your voice clearer.all round brill.x...will rate.x

hey pat I loved it

              from Pink Fashion

cool

Reminds me of Echoes by Pink Floyd. the laid back pace and everything, and the way you stress the vocals.
nice jam!