The girl I love is coming back today
A new song with unfinished lyrics
This is just a first take I did this morning to have an idea how it sounds
Let me know what you think

It's got a sort ELO feel to it.

You don't need to add too much, just basics

Look forward in hearing the finished artical

Denis

Did you mean electric light orchestra
I know the name but I'm not familiar with the music

I love this just for the title "The girl I love is coming back today"
                  What a wonderful day !!!!
This is a really nice song again, one that will only get better the more you play it and develop it.

what a wonderful day in deed!
I know I shouldn't have put the song up at this stage being unfinished and such a poor take but I was so please to be able to upload songs again that I couldn't stop myself!!!
 
Gonna work on a more final version very soon as soon as I managed to finish the lyrics
Any help welcome on that matter

Need to finish the lyrics. Well done, but the bridge is missing. You need to go away from that groove in order to come back again. If you can tell a little more of the story in the bridge it will make the last chorus much more satisfying. Smoothly done, anyway. I suggest going back and listening to a little Leon Redbone: even without the usual fingerstyle it has a little of that feel to it. Have you considered fingerpicking this one? Maybe just for a break it would provide a welcome contrast. If you don't do a bridge, then a verse and chorus with no lyrics and a second guitar somewhere in the middle might do as well.