This is not complete.  I've posted it to get comments and suggestions on the structure.  In particular, it's missing the lead guitar.  Please comment, good, bad or otherwise.

The rhythm guitar is strong enough without the use of lead guitar.

Like the la la la's really makes the song for me, Makes me want to goin-in

Try singing a little softer it will make your notes smoother, your tone is great.

Instead of a guitar solo, have some more la la la's but perhaps vary it.

Pan on Drums is OK but I prefer standard mix Bass drum And snare in middle.

Everybody now

LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA

Will rate

Denis