Hi all

This is a very early concept version for a track I may develop as 'battle music' for a FF-style 2D RPG I am contributing to.

Please make any suggestive comments you like about the production, the composition, the arrangement - and please take the piece in the context that it is written for

And as above - this is not a finished track by any means. It is a very short concept I did in like an hour for me to consider taking further.

thanks all

Dave.

too gothic for me. jack

just great 2 have u back..........

fish

i'll comment further with time in my pocket

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yep work in progress

would love to sing if u have any lyrics...
nice track very nice

Thanks dude... I'm afraid I dont have any lyrics, but I would be hugely interested in doing some collaborative work with you or anyone else who is up for it!?

I do alot of random instrumental stuff, but im a guitarist at heart.

Expected it to burst out into.......battle , onto a higher key , a whole octave higher!  Anything...fight...die...blood curdling...aaaaaagghh!  
O! it's not that type of game! lol
Too much coffee and GTA again!
But it is good battle music , the long drawn out note gives it an expectancy,
the very bit I expect it to 'brake out' into full on WAR! Apocalypse now style lol

I think its good. very adrenalin pumping.
  i dont think lyrics would suit game music.

Ian

I like it for a start ..I think it needs more ... You could do lots with this .... the main idea is very catchy ...
took a short break and found myself singing the melody ... so  imho you should do more with this

It's really good.

Great melody.

And then it ended.



I hope you carry this one on and finish it .