This song is what I call News forever. What do you hear when you turn on the news? Development! New this!New that! Improveed this! But where does this lead us?
Not progression. We kill ourself with the speed we  development. We kill others for our development ! Think of iraq! The deaths for our sake just so that we live in luxury. We never are aware of the news we see. We never feel what see..

you got some major talent in composing, but it needs tweaking, its quite simple. also there are a couple of notes in there which dont quite fit.

keep them comin

Ian

I like your tune!  I hear what Sir Boris is saying about the off key notes...but I find them endearing...sounds like the juxtaposition of technology and antiquity...the piano sounds like an old upright I've got...the darn thing just won't stay in tune - but I still love the sound.

I kept expecting a bigger boom somewhere in this song...it sounded like it was building up to it so many times, but it never arrived.  Good job - can't wait to hear some more! 

I'd love to hear this done to different sounds with effe...............Aa! that's better!
O! it's gone again! Funny little song, it got quite exiting there for a moment!

you have a nice beat but some notes don't fit, other than that great!!1  

This is a good starting point for something much bigger. 
The composition just needs to be taken slightly further to keep me interested - recording and playing are all fine, but it doesn't do quite enough for me.

The notes don't fit. Don't listen to them..... I actually wanted to put another 'wrong' note at 1:09 .
Pretty sinister. I agree with Spoon pretty much on the representation of two opposed ideas and the bigger boom.
Sonically, a lot to be desired, composition wise, it's nice.