Another rock track from demo cd. the same studio, the same gear. Guitar, bass, vocal, drums plus some effects.
Ideas on improvement?

I like this song ... strong vocals and very easy to listen to.. nice call and response in a couple of spots..

Decent guitar tones on all guitars (bass included) tasty solo fits well ... tight drumming there is a couple of spots I would drive the snare out front just a tad more ...but that is just me (personal taste).

I really like this song a lot ........sounds like a decent studio recording. 

The only thing that I could find different (not bad, just different) is this song seems to lack a real strong vocal hook ....you know ...that line in a song that everyone can remember  ..The verse seems to stand out more than the changes or chorus? to me.. which is perfectly fine (just different)...

I say great job and love your music so far sound good... I love the style too...
gets high vote

Hey gtr1960, thanks for great comments on our song.

Yes it is different as we all are different. Lot of people lot of tastes.

That's good you picked that .. strong vocal hook part... it makes me think to rearrange
and maybe not

Thanks again.

Cheers
Stan

awesome intro
cool drums
guitar fit well
good composition
good concept
good performance

brilliant demo. go ahead


uhm yes the (pre)chorus could have a second voice

yeah second voice would be cool. 
thanks for suggestion.

Excellent song , very good production. You've captured that "Big Sound' really well.
Part of me could agree with gtr1960 on a 'hook' in the vocal, though you do have a good chorus and I did find it 'catchy' enough, maybe it could 'jump' out a little more! or come back more pronounced, or maybe I'm talking shit!
Really good song! top vote. 

i follow kings ..............

but say wot is new here???

great song v good production ..............lacks a really good hook fer this fish

vote high..........

kersplash swordfish

excellent.
 I agree with the a second vocal harmony, that would put more emphasis on the chorus.
 I think some synth pads would suit an this very well, but nothing out of FL, you want a proper synth.

Ian

Seems everbody has commented what I wanted to say.

Why dont you try that hook, The song realIy great without it, but with a hook i may just start singinig it over.

Intro is Awesome, pro stuff.

Will rate

Denis

it's great..............the only improvement I would make is in the vocals, not sure what it is, but they seem a bit off-sounding though

Thanks for meaningful comments and ideas guys, really appreciated.

Looks like everyone wants to be hooked

@Swordfish: but say wot is new here???  - not sure what you mean by that
@devinlynnt    you mean that vocals not fitting the sound or something else, not sure I got it?