How about some pseudo-latin rock?

I wrote this much faster than I would have expected.

Lyrics:
Standing outside alone in the rain
Hoping you’ll let me in to explain
Mistakes I made were not my fault
Don’t take what I say with a grain of salt
I’m wanting you to know
I’m waiting for you to show me
I have a reason for my mistakes
I’ll do whatever it takes

You’re such a part of me
So why can’t we agree?
You’re such a part of me
So why can’t you just see?

It’s not my fault that what I say
Can be misconstrued in every way
I’ve got reasons for all the things I do
But you always think of just you
I’m wanting you to know
I’m waiting for you to show me
I have a reason for my mistakes
I’ll do whatever it takes

You’re such a part of me
So why can’t we agree?
You’re such a part of me
So why can’t you just see?
You’re such a part of me
So why can’t we agree?
You’re such a part of me
So why can’t you just see?

She sticks to herself
I’m looking for somebody else
I feel so guilty I feel so bad
And I guess that makes her glad
She’s raking my brain
I’m going insane
She won’t forgive me
It’s not meant to be

You’re such a part of me
So why can’t we agree?
You’re such a part of me
So why can’t you just see?
You’re such a part of me
So why can’t we agree?
You’re such a part of me

Nice song, you seem so be on a roll at the moment.

Nice arrangement, good recording, Good vox.

It would be nice if you could add some harmoney vox to the chorus to make it more different from the verses, the strings sound nice in this part, but I think need to come up in the mix.

Nice job

Will rate.

Denis

good song structure, and it sounds good overall, but it feels slow, as if it doesnt flow very easily and would die out any second. I dont know if that makes any sense but thats what it feels like. maybe try a fatser tempo, or putting more 'emotion' into your voice to give a sense of urgency and importance in what your saying.

Ian

nice song this one is!!!!
The chorus is very hooky like but is a bit overfilled with the background(string) key.I feel like it takes a bit away from the line.maybe drop it a bit.The song in general is really good!
Another hit song!