#1August 26th, 2007 · 12:51 PM
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In the dial

This song is not in a battle

let me know what you think. anything that comes into your head,  insults and all. I need the criticism to improve.

I hope you enjoy it.


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#2August 26th, 2007 · 12:55 PM
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I actually put the wrong one up, same song but i just tweaked about with it abit afterwards and i was going to put that one up. oh well. its practically the same
#3August 26th, 2007 · 01:02 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
What tha???
This Awesome Ian.
You were out for a while and you hit us with this!
I guess you been developing your skills.
Love that cello or upright arrangement you have going on!!
The melody is really good but something is flat on the arrangement,can't tell what it is I assume it might be the guitar.The end is wicked!!!
Hi rating IAN!

#4August 26th, 2007 · 01:11 PM
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590 posts
United Kingdom
cheers M. . I had a feeling the guitar might be out, cos i originally came up with the wierd plucked bit u hear at the begining and end, and thats played behind the bridge, so i was trying to tune everything else to that.

I also think it might be abit cluttered in some parts, which i had a go at fixing after this version.


#5August 27th, 2007 · 01:46 PM
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United Kingdom
There's a uniquness I like about this.

It feels like i'm in a jungle of some sort, mabe on a dofferent planet.  I'm lost, there's all these noises going on and I feeling uncomfortable.

Great for a soundtrack

Superb creativity Ian.

Will rate

#6August 27th, 2007 · 02:04 PM
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590 posts
United Kingdom
thanks denis. Thats an interesting image. and thanks for saying its unique, thats like one of the best compliments.

#7September 3rd, 2007 · 03:08 PM
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Don't know why but I have japanese feeling from this tune.

I can imagine it as soundtrack for documentary movie about life in japan

Maybe some mysterious voice or words would improve it a bit.


#8September 3rd, 2007 · 03:19 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
Yeah, the japenese have a very 'percussive' sounding instrument, i think its called the shamisen ( i just googled that).

thanks for your comment

#9September 5th, 2008 · 08:22 PM
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27 posts
Very experimental. Creative !

For me, it is a total zoom out process.
Started from very inside of a neuron. Then we saw that its inside of a bug. The bug is on a string. etc etc.

I lost the meaning at some point well but it feels really -meeningfull-

I liked the stereo transformations at the very beginning.
#10September 6th, 2008 · 07:59 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
Hey Ian...This is very cool man...I get the same feeling from the song asjeronimosmachines. I have no idea what I would change or do with this...I like what you have done.. I could never create stuff like this...This is why I like to listen to a lot of other musicians ...

Nice Rating....

#11September 6th, 2008 · 08:08 PM
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590 posts
United Kingdom
Hey, thanks. I'm glad you got some meaning from it Undream. Its been a long time since I listened to this. I think I was more creative back then... lol. I appreciate the comments

#12September 11th, 2008 · 04:42 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Very interesting piece , so many different sounds and.....just things going on !
There is indeed a bit too much going on in certain parts and I'm not into the hart beat type drum it takes over the experience, but otherwise a really cool creative experiment.
How about cutting up a scene from some Japanese film and put them in as another level to the song?
If you sampled all your sounds (even some midi sounds for effects)
you could get them to any tune/tone/timbre/time that you want!

I like these 'soundscapes' that are appearing recently, their more stories / songlines than songs!

Good stuff, keep it up SirB!
#13September 20th, 2008 · 01:35 AM
3 posts
the track is good but somehow it gives me the kimodo dragon kinda feel. like east asian sh*t. rest is awesome.
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