#1August 23rd, 2007 · 12:36 AM
16 threads / 13 songs
43 posts
Canada
WTFAMSNS
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This song is not in a battle


"Where the fuck are my shoes? ...No Seriously"

by Bert McKinley

Insure my face and eye lids
My heads buried in the sand

We lost our minds together
Let’s send out the search party

Posters on the telephone poles
I kind of want mine back

You made it out with timing
Why you ever coming back

Been eating all your sadness
And I’ve lost my appetite

Can’t buy some early dinner
Cause I just cant find my shoes

Posters on the telephone poles
I kind of want mine back

You made it out with timing
why you ever coming back

My face and eye lids
My heads buried in the sand

We lost our minds together
Let’s send out the search party

Posters on the telephone poles
I kind of want mine back

You made it out with timing
Why you ever coming back

Been eating all your sadness
And I’ve lost my appetite


I've been fiddling with roughening up my vocal sound. Did i take it too far? (To a Bright Eyes/Elliot Smith extreme)

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#2August 23rd, 2007 · 05:37 AM
131 threads / 114 songs
295 posts
United Kingdom
lovin those lyrics, sounds good, wish i could hear it in better quality, and slightly more filled out with some more instruments, don't really listen to much bright eyes, and don't even know who elliot smith is ha, so i can't give you advice on that but your voice sounds alright except for a few high notes you have trouble reaching, but all in all a nice tune
#3August 23rd, 2007 · 06:00 AM
29 threads / 14 songs
355 posts
Poland
yeah - love the lyrics. Very well written. plus, very intriquing arrangement. Like it - it's different and original. thanks
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