i ran across this earlier today and thought i'd throw it up here to hear your thoughts, there's a huge blank spot at the beginning before the vocals kick in that was suppose to be my solo, but we never got around to it. let us hear what you got to say.

Is, I want to hear you finish this thing!  It is so unfinished, it makes me sad, because the feel is cool..  I love the way it forces me to bounce along, and tap my foot..  BUT, the guitar is entirely too buzzy, it needs cleaned up a bit, really detracts from the mood...  And needs a bit more instrumentation, too empty as it is, with the emotion in the vocals, and riff, it begs for percussion..  Can't you hear it??  PLEEEEAAAASSE GIVE ME PERCUSSION! 

  See, there it goes again... I know you heard it...

             JimK

yeah, i think i can give you what you're looking for, i might just do that tonight. i'll go back through and throw a solo bit in the beginning and rerecord the rhythm track through a condenser mic, and that'll put some warmth in it too. thanks for motivating me to do something with this