Old synth recording. The beat is actually fabricated with my voice

The lyrics :

Feel like I feel

Hey girl, ' you alone tonight ?
So call, but keep in mind...
you better know just what's on my mind,
you better find the shortest way to my heart.
You better know just what's on my mind,
before you jump right back into my life.

REF.
You gotta feel like I feel, see the way I see things, like what I do.
If you wanna love me, feel like I feel, see the way I see things,
like what I do (if you wanna love me)

Hey girl, wanna groove tonight ?
Let's go then, but keep in mind...
you better know just what's on my mind,
you better find the shortest way to my heart.
You better know just what's on my mind,
before you jump right back into my life.

REF.
You gotta feel like I feel, see the way I see things, like what I do.
M, If you wanna love me, feel like I feel, see the way I see things,
like what I do (if you wanna love me)

REF.

Very 80s disco.  Pretty well done, I can appreciate the technical proficiency even though this is not the sort of thing I listen to.  Vocals need a little more control, but stylistically they're good.  Lyrics are average.  On the whole a good effort.

The vox could definitely use a bit more treatment.. and need to come up a bit in the mix.... I agree with the 80's feel to it... Kind of Human League meets Tears for fears..  This style is making a huge resurgence all over the globe right now... not real sure why... I didn't really like it then either.. hahaha.. but as DK says, it's a great effort..

        JimK

Its a very good dance song,but liven it up just a little.I love the song though, it origanal

Wow! Yeah Yeah Its got an 80's feel to it!  Very nice.  Seems as though everything is upfront though?  I think with a little panning and widening of the stereo image you could livin it up a bit.  Yeah, I think if it could breath a bit more you would notice a major difference.

it's vute. Remembers me of buturflies and calm valley... Living pictures.. like a film:) Nice.

I agree with the guys 80's indeed but Awesome!!
A bit more work on the vox and panning will add the extra dimension!!!
Great Job!!!!

Good chorus hook!

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