This is a recording with a different drummer, it's straight through a zoom 8 track and hasnt been mastered or tweaked but i still think it sounds pretty good, we jammed with this drummer for about half an hour before recording on this track. I have  different version as well which i'll post up soon

Redo the up close vocals in the chorus. The main vox rock. The verse reminds me of old school punk (DK or Black Flag or something), and the chorus vox clashes with that style but it could be that they are bassy, and flat, and who ever is doing it needs to back off and open up.

well said, i think.  i like the stagger of the guitar during the verse part

not bad ideas. agree totally with soni bout the chorus vox

Take a load of the bass eq off your voice on the harmonies and use a chorous effect...

All the parts seem to fit nicely together, just needs the remaster you spoke of in your own review of it... Re-post if you re-do it... Good stuff

Something simply doesn't work on this... I appreciated the guitar "albinian" sound very much. But the structure on the chorus is not the maximum. Good job anyway.

A fun song, look forward to hearing the remixed and mastered version.

i like the chorus, but i won't say too much because i don't really get much of a say considering i really don't like punk