Here is my idea, thrown together real quick..  Some drums with a bit more oomph than midi, and a touch of harmonica, because I think it just begged for it...  hope ya like it...

    JimK

Nice :-)  The harmonica is out of key, though.  But it's an excellent idea, and I love the improved drums.

Thanks!

FYI: The song is in C, but the versus start on A major, so there are some nasty accidentals.

Here's the chord sequence, each being repeated for two bars:

Intro: C A G A F
Verse: A G A F A G A F
Prechorus: Am Fm Am Fm
Chorus: C F C G C

Hmm.  An odd chord sequence.

Could I possibly have a copy of the drum track you used?

Dude thats catchy!!

Like whoa!!

 

I like that harmonica added in, that's probably the most "gets stuck in your head for weeks" instrument. The drum track used is great, makes it impossible to resist tapping on the desk  

Catchy Indeed !!!!!
Loving this a lot!!
Great ad on Dk song Mr JIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!      

The harmonica really goes nice. I dont kmow much about harminicas, but would I be right that they are set up to play in a certain key, G I think?

Drums real cool nice oomph.

Denis

so what! it works for me,great job jim,I really like this tune.

U, really good, nice prolonging of chords, at first seems like funny song but later it becames very serious...