Just a little something to make into something real...later ?!? I've been listening to a lot of Ryan Adams, and I think it shows. Any opinions welcome!

Nice acoustic sound, nice space in the arrangement.

I think you could thin out the bass a bit and bring the vocals forward in the mix.

This is going to be a quality song when it's finished.

Great job.

Denis

Yeah...I pretty much have to redo the whole thing vocal wise, as it was a live recording of me and the guitar...and write some lyrics! And the bass is too thick. Thanks Denis, you're stuff is fantastic!

Love this song.The guitar sound recording is great.Something sounds a bit out of tune when the rest of the instruments come in in the beginning and the vox is buried.Its also a little short.other than that the song itself is really awesome,just beautiful.Any chance of redoing it I'm loving this!!!!You and Dennis should do a collab, you both a great tone and style.

Thanks a lot...I think that thing that is out of tune is my voice...always a challenge for me. I hope to turn this into a real song!

To much treble waaaaaaaaaaaay to much treble.

like it!!! The accoustic sounds great! the vocals need polishing, but i really really like this song a lot! I think it has lots of potential!