Sunset - Crack |
Ok, here goes the history of the song we made with my band Crack (ex Oir):
Monday's night we made the start of the song.
Tuesday we built the whole song.
Wednesday we recorded it, in the living room, home-gear.
This is the idea of the song, so is not as good as we would like but is pretty understandable. It has mistakes and timing details, but you will get it anyway. Also my solo is pretty bad, cause it a bit hard to make a solo in a couple of hours in a 5/8 x3 6/8 basis.
Well, hope you leave a comment on this.
Lyrics:
Verse 1:
Deep blue eyes has gone away
She has walked, nothing said
And she goes without her heart
Without a word, without a chart
Verse 2:
Baby I trust you ( she said)
Baby I love you (and then )
Baby I’ll miss you
But baby, I’m leaving you
Chorus:
Your heart is gonna hurt
Cause you’ve given up the cause
And my heart is beating fast
You don’t really care your heart
Your heart...
Verse 3:
You know you love me, baby
But just can’t be my girl,
I wonder why, I wonder why i really wonder why
But you just can’t be my girl
Chorus:
Your heart is gonna hurt
Cause you’ve given up the cause
And my heart is beating fast
You don’t really care your heart
Your heart...
Chorus:
Your heart is gonna hurt
Cause you’ve given up the cause
And my heart is beating fast
You don’t really care your heart
Your heart...
Monday's night we made the start of the song.
Tuesday we built the whole song.
Wednesday we recorded it, in the living room, home-gear.
This is the idea of the song, so is not as good as we would like but is pretty understandable. It has mistakes and timing details, but you will get it anyway. Also my solo is pretty bad, cause it a bit hard to make a solo in a couple of hours in a 5/8 x3 6/8 basis.
Well, hope you leave a comment on this.
Lyrics:
Verse 1:
Deep blue eyes has gone away
She has walked, nothing said
And she goes without her heart
Without a word, without a chart
Verse 2:
Baby I trust you ( she said)
Baby I love you (and then )
Baby I’ll miss you
But baby, I’m leaving you
Chorus:
Your heart is gonna hurt
Cause you’ve given up the cause
And my heart is beating fast
You don’t really care your heart
Your heart...
Verse 3:
You know you love me, baby
But just can’t be my girl,
I wonder why, I wonder why i really wonder why
But you just can’t be my girl
Chorus:
Your heart is gonna hurt
Cause you’ve given up the cause
And my heart is beating fast
You don’t really care your heart
Your heart...
Chorus:
Your heart is gonna hurt
Cause you’ve given up the cause
And my heart is beating fast
You don’t really care your heart
Your heart...
dude
guitar solo suck?? NO WAY!!!!!!
hahah
i luv the carnavil theme
and those vox... so sexy
luv the way they kinda role,
luv the begining of the song how his vox is all clear and all
i think the lyrics are sweet and simple, but i wish they had a little more depth to em is all. i donno
i'll think on it
btw if ever you find you need new lyrics, call me
high vote here
paper cut u to shreds
pap the doll
guitar solo suck?? NO WAY!!!!!!
hahah
i luv the carnavil theme
and those vox... so sexy
luv the way they kinda role,
luv the begining of the song how his vox is all clear and all
i think the lyrics are sweet and simple, but i wish they had a little more depth to em is all. i donno
i'll think on it
btw if ever you find you need new lyrics, call me
high vote here
paper cut u to shreds
pap the doll
Iz,
Excellent work, I love all the changes, great refrain, excellent vocals and lyrics, at times I feel some Rush influence (of whom I LOVE!!) Very nice, tighten this up a bit and it will be glorious!
VK
Excellent work, I love all the changes, great refrain, excellent vocals and lyrics, at times I feel some Rush influence (of whom I LOVE!!) Very nice, tighten this up a bit and it will be glorious!
VK
had my probs with counting until I read your post until end
phantastic song and phantstic chords. love the chorus vocals. and of course the guitar. You all did a really great job!!!!
wonderful composition. bit hiss on the track. but I guess this was a one-take-live-record?
wanna hear more of you.
phantastic song and phantstic chords. love the chorus vocals. and of course the guitar. You all did a really great job!!!!
wonderful composition. bit hiss on the track. but I guess this was a one-take-live-record?
wanna hear more of you.
excellente' |
nice job this is pretty tight considering you just wrote it. I would love to hear it again after you have rehearsed it for a little while......you know......uhmm,.. where you get to the point where you just "feel it" and don't have to think about it.
again super job on the guitar and vox. The song composition show good musical talent and skills.
Gets good vote....it would be a top vote but I feel you could do it tons better with a little more time.
P.S I say gets good vote even though I don't know if the voting thing even works lol
most impressed with this song
again super job on the guitar and vox. The song composition show good musical talent and skills.
Gets good vote....it would be a top vote but I feel you could do it tons better with a little more time.
P.S I say gets good vote even though I don't know if the voting thing even works lol
most impressed with this song
I dig those live recordings. They are just "live", you know!
Good song, good music, nice proggy feel.
The only thing that I would do, is to increase the tempo a bit and add some synth pads - would give more fuller sound scape. But that's just me, so don't take it straight away
Keep 'em coming, bro.
Good song, good music, nice proggy feel.
The only thing that I would do, is to increase the tempo a bit and add some synth pads - would give more fuller sound scape. But that's just me, so don't take it straight away
Keep 'em coming, bro.
Thanks for the feedback.
Well, Synchu, actually, if we had a keyboarder we could add some synths and stuff, but we don't have at the moment... Though we could make the singer play some easy notes and chords in the keyboard while he can. Is not a bad idea..
> Iszil
Well, Synchu, actually, if we had a keyboarder we could add some synths and stuff, but we don't have at the moment... Though we could make the singer play some easy notes and chords in the keyboard while he can. Is not a bad idea..
> Iszil
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